范文講評(píng):旅游事業(yè)
「要求」
要求:旅游事業(yè)對(duì)我國(guó)具有舉足輕重的作用。請(qǐng)以Ways to Improve China’s Tourism為題為我國(guó)旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點(diǎn)建議。(提示:擴(kuò)大宣傳,改善旅游設(shè)施,提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量……)
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Ways to Improve china’s tourism
Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However,tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done,China’s tourism will definitely be improved.
First,our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second,facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally,the quality of service should be improved.
Don’t tell people their ideas are bad unless you’ve got a good one.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文第一段提出問(wèn)題,第二段解決問(wèn)題,“first”,“second”,“finally”等詞的使用,使整篇文章條理格外清晰。
范文講評(píng):如何利用空余時(shí)間
「要求」
題目:你將參加校園英語(yǔ)講演比賽。現(xiàn)在需要寫(xiě)出一份簡(jiǎn)要的底稿,底稿應(yīng)包含以下基本要點(diǎn)。
隨著工作時(shí)間的縮短,空余時(shí)間越來(lái)越多了。
如何利用空余時(shí)間。
利用空余時(shí)間的益處。
題目自擬。
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Use of Free Time
Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment,but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer,and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping,what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school?