英語六級命題作文：盲目追星
- 經(jīng)典范文
- 結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點(diǎn)詞匯
- 重點(diǎn)句背誦與仿寫
Blindly Worshipping Stars
With the ever-growing popularity of the Internet, it is becoming much easier to keep track of your favorite celebrities. Because of the vast amounts of information about these celebrities that exists, it is easy to become mesmerized by them.
But blindly worshipping these stars can be dangerous. First of all, celebrities tend to live by different rules to everyone else. If you were to adapt their unhealthy lifestyle, you would most certainly have to pay for the consequences. Secondly, celebrities are often seen in expensive clothing, cars, and homes that most people cannot afford. In addition, photographs that you see of celebrities are often touched up to make them look more perfect than they really are.
If there are celebrities that you like, it is best to remember that their lives are very different from most people's lives and that though may seem glamorous, they have their own imperfections like everyone else. (152 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段引入話題點(diǎn)出盲目追星的社會環(huán)境。
第二段從三方面闡述盲目追星的危險。
第三段話題結(jié)論提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，明星也有自己的缺點(diǎn)和不足。
盲目追星
隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的使用越來越普遍，我們能夠更方便地了解到自己喜歡的明星們的動態(tài)。因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)上有大量關(guān)于這些名人的信息，所以很容易對他們癡迷。
但是盲目追星卻是很危險的。首先，名人們的生活準(zhǔn)則一般不同于普通大眾。如果你非要盲從他們不健康的生活方式，必然要付出相應(yīng)的代價。第二，名人們通?？雌饋矶即┌嘿F的衣飾，坐名貴香車，住奢華豪宅，這些都是大多數(shù)人無法承擔(dān)支付的。而且，關(guān)于明星的照片也通常美化名人，使他們看起來比真實(shí)生活中更加完美。
如果你也有自己喜歡的明星，最好要記住這一點(diǎn)： 他們的生活不同于大多數(shù)人，即使看起來非常風(fēng)光，他們也像其他人一樣存在著缺點(diǎn)和不足。
keep track of 了解
celebrity n. 名人
mesmerize v. 迷惑，迷住
worship v. 崇拜，尊敬
touch up 潤色，修改
glamorous adj. 富有魅力的
imperfection n. 瑕疵，缺點(diǎn)
1. With the ever-growing popularity of the Internet, it is becoming much easier to keep track of your favorite celebrities. 隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的使用越來越普遍，我們能夠更方便地了解到自己喜歡的明星們的動態(tài)。
2. Celebrities tend to live by different rules to everyone else. If you were to adapt their unhealthy lifestyle, you would most certainly have to pay for the consequences. 名人們的生活準(zhǔn)則一般不同于普通大眾。如果你非要盲從他們不健康的生活方式，必然要付出相應(yīng)的代價。
3. In addition, photographs that you see of celebrities are often touched up to make them look more perfect than they really are. 而且，關(guān)于明星的照片也通常美化名人，使他們看起來比真實(shí)生活中更加完美。
4. If there are celebrities that you like, it is best to remember that their lives are very different from most people's lives and that though may seem glamorous, they have their own imperfections like everyone else. 如果你也有自己喜歡的明星，最好要記住這一點(diǎn)： 他們的生活不同于大多數(shù)人，即使看起來非常風(fēng)光，他們也像其他人一樣存在著缺點(diǎn)和不足。
