GRE作文：3種開頭段錯(cuò)誤低分寫法反向分析寫法要點(diǎn)

　　好的開頭是一篇作文成功的一半，對(duì)于GRE考試的作文來說也是如此。想要拿到高分難度會(huì)很高，而以下這些開頭寫法，正是考生特別需要注意避免的。

　　GRE作文失敗開頭：觀點(diǎn)獨(dú)斷

　　案例：Topic - The importance of confidence

　　開頭：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

　　分析：GRE考試考察的能力之一就是邏輯性思維，考生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該特別注意客觀性，不能主觀臆斷，比如上面這個(gè)開頭，又是the most又是all，觀點(diǎn)太過絕對(duì)獨(dú)斷，完全不給予討論的空間和余地，作為作文開頭來說顯得太過幼稚，難以取得高分。

　　GRE作文失敗開頭：偏離主題

　　案例：Topic - It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (GRE真題)

　　開頭：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　分析：開頭問對(duì)于某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是同意還是不同意，結(jié)果拉拉雜雜的寫了一堆跟主題沒有關(guān)系的內(nèi)容，這樣的寫法讓人住不住重點(diǎn)，完全偏離了需要展開論述的主題，會(huì)給考官留下不好的印象。

　　GRE作文失敗開頭：觀點(diǎn)模糊

　　案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　開頭1：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 20, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　開頭2：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　分析：需要給出明確觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候繞來繞去不表明態(tài)度，而是說一些無關(guān)的廢話，會(huì)給人留下騙字?jǐn)?shù)的印象。建議考生在寫作時(shí)開門見山，表明態(tài)度和觀點(diǎn)。

　　以上是考生們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)可能比較容易寫出來的低分開頭，大家平時(shí)應(yīng)多加留意，避免這些寫法，通過練習(xí)寫出好的GRE作文，并最終取得滿意分?jǐn)?shù)。