雅思寫(xiě)作保護(hù)動(dòng)物的話題應(yīng)如何動(dòng)筆

　　遇到動(dòng)物類(lèi)話題，通常學(xué)生第一反應(yīng)是不可以殺，要愛(ài)護(hù)動(dòng)物，但是同學(xué)們有想過(guò)如果動(dòng)物禁止以任何目的為由而殺，對(duì)世界、對(duì)人類(lèi)、甚至對(duì)自身有什么影響嗎?

　　題目

　　In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　題目分析

　　在當(dāng)代社會(huì)，使用動(dòng)物為食物或是其他產(chǎn)品如衣服和藥品不再有必要，在一定程度上，你是否同意?

　　文章結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　第一段：引出主題，表明自身觀點(diǎn)，即反對(duì)題目觀點(diǎn)。

　　第二、三段: 闡述使用動(dòng)物為了食物與醫(yī)藥是有必要的。

　　第四段：闡述使用動(dòng)物為了衣服是沒(méi)必要的。

　　第五段：總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)。

　　Sample Answer

　　Animals have always been the sources of human food, clothes, medicine or other products since human civilization began. Some people, however, claim that human use of animals is no more necessary in modern time. Even as an animal lover, I am against this view myself.

　　On the one hand, animal meat, by providing necessary nutrition (protein , fat) and energy, is essential to human health. Living in this competitive modern world, our energy consumption doubles with the increasing living pressure. When we are exhausted after a long day`s work, a wonderful meal of steak or chicken may be the best way to revive our vigor.

　　On the other hand, for human survival, it is crucial to extract valuable substance from animals for medical purpose. Only certain animals can provide a cure for some fatal disease, say, cancer, and it is common sense that a man’s life is of more importance than that of an animal in extreme situations.

　　Exploiting animals for clothes, however, is unnecessary. It is extremely cruel to slaughter minks or seals to make fur coats. Fashion means torture for defenseless animals. In modern society, high-tech materials can replace fur to keep human warm in cold winter.

　　In spite of the fact that we have every reason to use animals for food and pills out of necessity, we should always keep in mind that no wild or endangered animals are to be harmed for human interest. As the most powerful creature on the earth, we should be grateful for the sacrifice of animals we herd.

　　若想作文取高分，記得重點(diǎn)看每篇作文的論點(diǎn)論據(jù)，與表達(dá)方式，最終梳理文章精華之處，培養(yǎng)自身的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)且具有邏輯性的思維模式。