雅思寫作高分范文40篇整理(三十九)

Some people believe that education is the only critical factor to the development of a country.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Development of a country means making the country work their way up the ladder of economic performance, living standards, sustainability and equality. However, there are people of the opinion that the only factor responsible for the development of a country is education. In my opinion, education does plays a very important role in the advancement of a country, however it is not the only factor playing its role.

Education is very important for a country, the better the education system the better will be the future. For instance, a country having education for all would mean that it will have better skilled force, it might even be possible that out of them some would become entrepreneurs, others good politicians, may be great teachers. This enables in building up a strong foundation.

However, education is not the only factor playing role. It is important for people to be educated but it is more important that education is done in the right field. For instance, if in the present times, there is no teaching of computers in school or colleges, the country is less likely to benefit. Even more, factors such as poverty play a very important role. No matter a country has free education but if the children don’t have food it is less likely that they will study.

To sum up, educations surely plays a pivotal role in the development of country, but other factors such as better living standards, good health system also are essential.