2011年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題解讀及范文(文都教育版)

Online Shopping
 

Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users. For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.

Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient. What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting instead of going out by foot or driving. Secondly, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers. However, in spite of convenience and more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages. Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage. It’s common that articles aren’t so good just as they are described online that customers always buy fake commodities. In addition, it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.

As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better。Specifically speaking, government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners. Only by this way can online shopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers.

 

2011年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題解讀

此次考試的作文題目為Online shopping，是一個(gè)考生們相當(dāng)熟悉的話題，這也沿襲了四級(jí)考試貼近學(xué)生生活的特點(diǎn)，相信考生一定會(huì)覺得有話可說(shuō)。

從題材上來(lái)看，此次作文屬于校園生活類，題材上屬于議論文，命題類型是現(xiàn)象解釋型，這與2006年新題型（學(xué)生自主選課），2007年12月（該選什么樣的課程）以及2009年6月（博物館免費(fèi)）是同一類型的，考生考前若能掌握了寫作模板，寫好這篇文章應(yīng)該不難。主要寫作思路如下：

第一段應(yīng)該是現(xiàn)象引入段，主要①描述現(xiàn)象，引起話題；②表現(xiàn)較為典型的一個(gè)方面；③進(jìn)一步闡述現(xiàn)象。

第二段是說(shuō)明原因段，主要①承上啟下,解釋這一現(xiàn)象的原因一；②原因二；③原因三；④重申觀點(diǎn)，總結(jié)上述觀點(diǎn)。

第三段是總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)段，主要①講述導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果；②作者的態(tài)度；③原因一；④原因二；⑤總結(jié)全文。

下面是文都四六級(jí)精品圖書《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試三層突破——寫作?完形?翻譯》中“現(xiàn)象解釋型”的模板，請(qǐng)同學(xué)們對(duì)照一下：

第一段：Nowadays, there exists a public controversy concerning the issue of引出現(xiàn)象.What amazes us most is典型的一個(gè)方面.It is true that進(jìn)一步闡述現(xiàn)象.

第二段：Many reasons account for 這一現(xiàn)象The main reason is原因一.What is more, 原因二. Thirdly, 原因三.

第三段：As a result,總結(jié)上述觀點(diǎn).Considering all these, 講述導(dǎo)致結(jié)果及作者態(tài)度.For one thing, 原因一. For another, 原因二.In conclusion,總結(jié)全文.

通過(guò)對(duì)比，大家對(duì)自己此次作文的寫作是否滿意呢？可見，考前多看書、多練習(xí)，對(duì)于過(guò)關(guān)得高分還是很有必要的。要相信：“一分耕耘，一分收獲”。祝大家考個(gè)好成績(jī)。