2011年6月英語四級真題作文范文(滬江外教版1)

Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.
Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.

點評：
作者在第一段描述了網(wǎng)購作為一種時尚給大家的生活帶來了便利，然后話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，說網(wǎng)購仍然取代不了面對面的購物交流。

第二段主要還是從正反兩方面分析了網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)勢和不足，以此描述大家對網(wǎng)購的不同反應(yīng)。

第三段作者表明了自己的觀點，對網(wǎng)購的便利和不足之處都做了描述。

綜合來講，本篇文章觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達地道，有不少閃光詞匯，但是，內(nèi)容深度上來講還有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表達個人觀點，和第二段稍有重復(fù)?？忌枰⒁庥^點的清晰，不宜模棱兩可。