2011年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)真題作文范文(滬江網(wǎng)校高分版)

My views on Online Shopping

1. 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)購(gòu)已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚
2. 網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處，但也有不少問(wèn)題
3. 我的建議

In nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.

Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.

It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本次四級(jí)作文探討的是最近的熱點(diǎn)話題之一——互聯(lián)網(wǎng)網(wǎng)購(gòu)。目前網(wǎng)購(gòu)的風(fēng)靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對(duì)于該話題還是比較熟悉的。但是，比較特殊的是，題干所列出的要求的是考生從一個(gè)客觀的角度來(lái)闡述該話題，而不是簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己的意見(jiàn)。所以，考生應(yīng)當(dāng)審清楚題，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不僅僅要列出網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，還必須給出相應(yīng)的缺點(diǎn)。

按照四級(jí)作文的要求，考生在第一段時(shí)應(yīng)該總述現(xiàn)象并引出話題；

第二段考生應(yīng)當(dāng)從正反兩方面來(lái)論述網(wǎng)購(gòu)，分別鋪陳其優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)；關(guān)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)，網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來(lái)闡述，比如說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)可以節(jié)省很多時(shí)間；網(wǎng)購(gòu)可以節(jié)省很多成本開(kāi)支等；其次，缺點(diǎn)方面考生可以把重心放在誠(chéng)信方面；為了不至于跟優(yōu)點(diǎn)相比，缺點(diǎn)方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點(diǎn)，比如說(shuō)與傳統(tǒng)購(gòu)物相比，網(wǎng)購(gòu)少去了很多砍價(jià)的樂(lè)趣；

第三點(diǎn)要求考生對(duì)于第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)給出自己的建議。此處我們可以根據(jù)第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)方面給出相應(yīng)的防范應(yīng)對(duì)措施。
整篇作文話題比較好展開(kāi)，難度不大，只要考生審好題，列出相應(yīng)點(diǎn)，相信作文不會(huì)是難題。