2012年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文范文(滬江網(wǎng)校高分版含解析)

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

With the development of Internet, it has influenced our society to a large extent. The fundamental changes present not only on its own application, but also on all aspects of daily life, especially on our interpersonal communication.

We can communicate with others anytime and anywhere via internet. Otherwise, we would have to arrange our schedules strictly in advance. Also, interpersonal communication through the internet is not restricted by space. For example, in most multinational corporations, instant messages and video conferences help colleagues solve problems timely and efficiently. Last but not least, the internet can greatly speed up our interpersonal communication.

However, there’s also disadvantage that the internet brings to us. More and more people chat on line instead of communicating face to face. As a result, people become more and more indifferent to each other in real life.

In conclusion, communication through the internet could bring us both convenience and inconvenience. We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】

這次的六級(jí)寫(xiě)作是請(qǐng)考生談?wù)劸W(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)人際交流的影響。這個(gè)話題本身已是日常生活的熱點(diǎn)，考生并不陌生，有話可說(shuō)。

文章的展開(kāi)還是同過(guò)去的議論文寫(xiě)作一致。仍然可以用引入、闡釋有何影響和自己的觀點(diǎn)這樣的三段式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。在行文時(shí)，注意文章的層次和邏輯梳理，在談具體影響時(shí)，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行對(duì)比論證，論證網(wǎng)絡(luò)出現(xiàn)和沒(méi)有網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)，人際交流的差異，也可進(jìn)行結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行舉例論證。

本篇范文在句式上，長(zhǎng)短搭配，形式多變。從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等多種表達(dá)方式，值得借鑒。同時(shí)，用詞同樣注意多樣化，對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)相關(guān)詞匯的多種表達(dá)(web, cyber, instant message, video conference等)，考生同樣應(yīng)在平時(shí)注意歸類(lèi)、積累。