怎么讓托福寫(xiě)作更加完美？

　　學(xué)生們寫(xiě)的托福作文里或多或少都會(huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。

　　拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤

　　這里的拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的誤打，而是本身對(duì)詞匯拼寫(xiě)記憶的錯(cuò)誤。

　　亂用大詞

　　表達(dá)中式

　　表意重復(fù)

　　?They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.

　　前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

　　? The show is so compelling but attractive.

　　?compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫(xiě)就讓人不明白。

　　固定用法錯(cuò)誤

　　? To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents

　　also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

　　——To some extends應(yīng)改為T(mén)o some extent

　　例證夸張

　　? For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor

　　cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

　　雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒(méi)有這么大。

　　成分多余

　　? According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese

　　Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of

　　university students who are taking part-time jobs.

　　該句中的shows that是多余的成分。

　　詞性混亂

　　? However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your

　　husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

　　句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing。

　　時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

　　托福作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，除了拿過(guò)去事件作為例子用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。

　　? Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

　　—— claimed應(yīng)該改為claim

　　希望上面的常見(jiàn)的托福作文備考扣分點(diǎn)可以幫助大家提高托福寫(xiě)作成績(jī)，取得優(yōu)異的成績(jī)，聽(tīng)力課堂預(yù)祝各位考試順利，早日結(jié)束考試。