托福寫作六大高分句型精析

　　ETS 對于托福獨(dú)立寫作的文章有三大要求：文章的組織，文章的論證以及文章的語言。對于那些本身文章結(jié)構(gòu)和論證問題不大的童鞋，語言如果能夠?qū)懙脑俑叽笊弦恍?，毫無疑問會(huì)大大的加分的;同時(shí)對于那些經(jīng)常性找不到思路或者不知道自己在說啥的親們，如果語言能夠搞得牛逼一些的話呢，很多情況下也能唬住考官拿到相對不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)。

　　雖然語言很重要，但是我相信大部分同學(xué)都會(huì)說語言的提高根本不是短時(shí)間內(nèi)可以做到的。如果我們想通過自己去泛讀各種英文材料來提高自己的語言確實(shí)需要一定的時(shí)間，因?yàn)槲覀儾恢牢覀冃枰x什么，也就是說我們所讀的東西很難轉(zhuǎn)化成我們在考場上寫作文的時(shí)候能用的東西，本文為各位梳理托福寫作最易學(xué)、實(shí)用、拿分的六大句型，希望能在托福寫作備考過程中對提高大家的語言實(shí)力有幫助。

　　句型1

　　原文材料：

　　Recent revelations from the journalist Glenn Greenwald put the number of Americans under government surveillance at a colossal 1.2 million people.

　　推薦句型：

　　Recent ... from…put the number of…at ...

　　推薦理由：

　　數(shù)據(jù)論證憑借自身的通(wu)用(lai)深受男女老少歡迎，可以說是居家旅行托福雅思之必備神器。這個(gè)句式用在數(shù)據(jù)論證中，介紹某一來源中的一個(gè)具體數(shù)字再裝逼不過了。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. A recent survey jointly conducted by Tencent.com and National Analysis has put the number of users of cab-hailing apps at a colossal 150 million, with only 1.8% aged over 50.

　　2. A recent report issued by the government has put the number of Chinese cities blanketed by smog at an astonishing 61.

　　3. A recent poll conducted by Shanghai University has put the number of respondents who want to live in a cheap place at a whopping 350, 000, approximately 80% of whom are under the age of 30.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Technologies designed to make our lives easier actually make it more complicated.

　　科技并不是公平的，對什么都能迅速上手的年輕人來說，科技著實(shí)使生活變得簡單。但是對于腦筋不夠靈活視力也逐年下降的老年人來說，科技反而會(huì)使他們的生活變復(fù)雜。比如騰訊和國家分析局做的一個(gè)調(diào)查顯示打車軟件的用戶已經(jīng)高達(dá)1.5億，但這其中只有1.8%的用戶年紀(jì)超過50歲(此調(diào)查純屬虛構(gòu)如有雷同純屬巧合)。大爺大媽們不會(huì)用軟件，路上的車都被年輕人用打車軟件預(yù)定了，你說科技是不是使老年人的生活更復(fù)雜了?

　　2. Environmental problems are too complex, and individuals cannot handle them.

　　環(huán)境問題一直是近年來各種媒體上的buzzword，那為了渲染環(huán)境問題嚴(yán)重，我們可以一句話證明環(huán)境沒救了。比如第二個(gè)例句說，近來一個(gè)中國政府報(bào)告稱被霧霾籠罩的中國城市數(shù)目已經(jīng)達(dá)到駭人的61個(gè)。后面再解釋說pm2.5多高，污染程度之深, 來證明個(gè)人行為是無法解決這樣的問題的。Nailed it～

　　3. Which place do you prefer to live in? a. a place that is not expensive. b. a place that is close to relatives c. a place with a lot of shops and restaurants around

　　這道三選一問題非常接地氣，問人們想住什么樣的地方。那么上海大學(xué)的民調(diào)又可以出場了，多達(dá)350，000位受訪者表示愿意住在便宜的地方，其中百分之八十左右是30歲以下的窮屌絲，那這道題的答案顯然就是年輕人住便宜點(diǎn)，哪怕上下班山水迢迢。

　　句型2

　　原文材料：

　　As human behavior is tracked and merchandized on a massive scale, the Internet of Things creates the perfect conditions to bolster and expand the surveillance state.

　　推薦句型：

　　As…, …creates perfect conditions to...

　　推薦理由：

　　在開頭lead-in的部分，很多同學(xué)為了避免唐突尷尬會(huì)說“隨著時(shí)代發(fā)展社會(huì)進(jìn)步人民生活水平提高”等等廢話，那么上面這個(gè)句型可以讓我們的cliche變得稍稍不那么low。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. As information technology continues to progress, social network sites create perfect conditions for malicious hackers to access privacy that we have no intention to reveal to strangers.

　　2. As people’s philosophy of education evolves, wealthy parents now create perfect conditions for their children to learn both liberal arts and science, so that they can build a well-rounded personality from an early age.

　　3. As technologies develop rapidly, instant communication tools create perfect conditions for young people to keep in touch with their old friends, no matter how far they are apart from each other.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Some people record experience by sharing picture or other information on social network sites, while others don’t like to share. Which do you prefer?

　　這道題在大規(guī)模好萊塢女星艷照泄漏之后出顯得特別與時(shí)俱進(jìn)。在社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上，你是一個(gè)悶騷潛水員，還是一個(gè)愛秀直播逼呢?如果選擇前者，我們在引入話題時(shí)就可以用上例句一，隨著信息技術(shù)不斷進(jìn)步，社交網(wǎng)站給腹黑的黑客們提供了完美的條件去窺探我們無意向陌生人透露的隱私，所以我們最好還是不作不死。

　　2. Young school children should be required to learn art and music in addition to science, math, history and language.

　　隨著教育觀念的一步步革新，家長們不再是拿著雞毛撣子逼孩子學(xué)習(xí)的角色了，他們也意識(shí)到了素質(zhì)教育的重要。但是主課之外的音樂美術(shù)等等也不是誰都學(xué)得起的，于是家底厚實(shí)的爹們?yōu)樗麄兊墓忧Ы饎?chuàng)造了完美的條件來學(xué)習(xí)人文和科學(xué)知識(shí)，這樣就可以早早培養(yǎng)孩子們健全的人格。

　　3. Moving to a new town or country is not a good thing because people will lose their friends.

　　搬去新的國家或者城市是不好的，因?yàn)闀?huì)跟朋友失聯(lián)?四處浪的年輕人肯定覺得這是BS，現(xiàn)在溝通這么方便，怎么會(huì)失去朋友呢?所以，如例句三所說，隨著科技迅速發(fā)展，即時(shí)通訊工具給年輕人與舊友交流創(chuàng)造了完美的平臺(tái)，無論他們相隔多遠(yuǎn)。所謂但愿人長久，千里聊QQ。

　　句型3

　　原文材料：

　　"The new rules should thus expose polluters to a scissor-style pressure:from above,through the central-planning system,and from below,from the media and organisations such as Mr Ma's."

　　推薦句型：

　　xxx be exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through…, and from below, from….

　　推薦理由：

　　壓力毫無疑問是一個(gè)寫作和口語考試中非常常用的一個(gè)萬能理由，因?yàn)樗梢愿芏鄸|西相關(guān)，比如壓力的來源(生活壓力，學(xué)習(xí)壓力，工作壓力)，壓力的影響(身體差，心情不爽)，減壓的方式和措施等等，上面的句型就可以用來描寫某一個(gè)主體，比如工作的人或者學(xué)生，面臨著雙重壓力，工作的人可能來自照顧老人撫養(yǎng)孩子;學(xué)生可能來自父母老師以及同伴。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. A majority of the youths today are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through looking after the ever growing aging population, and from below, from the soaring costs of raising children.

　　2. A multitude of teenagers at present are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. People care more about public recognition than about money.

　　根據(jù)上面的例句，這個(gè)題目我們可以選擇不同意，那些苦逼的剛上班沒幾年的年輕人，怎么可能更在乎名而不是錢呢?他們壓力多大啊，當(dāng)然需要錢了啊;

　　2. Younger school children should be required to study music and art in addition to language, science, and mathematics.

　　同樣，這個(gè)題目我們也可以選擇不同意的立場，孩子們本來就壓力特別大，父母期望高，同伴都一個(gè)比一個(gè)牛逼，學(xué)校里面的課程和輔導(dǎo)課都上不完呢，怎么可能有時(shí)間搞別的呢。這不是坑爹嗎?

　　句型4

　　原文材料：

　　Meanwhile, cars themselves are becoming computers on wheels, with operating system updates coming wirelessly over the air.

　　推薦句型：

　　with+n./pron.+doing

　　推薦理由：

　　兩個(gè)主語發(fā)出兩種動(dòng)作，這兩種動(dòng)作又幾乎同時(shí)發(fā)生，你會(huì)怎么寫?打賭80%的同學(xué)都是The economy is developing fast, but the environment is deteriorating. 為了增強(qiáng)句式變化，我們可以使用一個(gè)with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，把其中一個(gè)主語和動(dòng)作塞進(jìn)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)里。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. Urban residents find it more difficult to raise children than five decades ago, with living cost and tuition hitting all time high.

　　2. Fresh grads in first-tier cities nowadays find themselves more pressured than ever before,with competition in the job market growing increasingly stiff.

　　3. This is due to the fact that students can retrieve information and obtain knowledge from various sources other than teachers, with new media advancing continuously these years.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. It is easier for parents to raise children than 50 years ago.

　　過去人們一直抱怨計(jì)劃生育政策，但是開放二胎之后卻沒多少人生。生孩子就那么分分鐘的事兒，為啥沒人生呢?不好養(yǎng)唄。奶粉貴不貴，上學(xué)貴不貴，所以就像第一個(gè)例句說的，隨著生活和教育成本再創(chuàng)新高，城市居民發(fā)現(xiàn)撫養(yǎng)孩子比五十年前難多了。

　　2. The rules the whole society expects young people to follow are too strict.

　　近來找過工作的年輕人肯定都感受到了這個(gè)社會(huì)森森的惡意，隨便一家很水的公司招聘都要3、5年的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，這么苛刻的規(guī)則還讓不讓我們新畢業(yè)的菜鳥玩兒了?所以這一題我們舉雙手雙腳贊成，如例句二所說，工作市場競爭的激烈指數(shù)一路飆升，讓一線城市的小鮮肉們感受到了史無前例的壓力。

　　3. Teachers today are less appreciated and valued than in the past.

　　身為老師我只能為這題含淚點(diǎn)贊，隨著新媒體的發(fā)展，學(xué)生們翅膀硬了，有度娘有谷歌，哪里不會(huì)點(diǎn)哪里，誰還在乎老師呢。

　　句型5

　　原文材料：

　　It takes very little imagination to foresee how the kitchen mood wall could lead to advertisements for antidepressants that follow you around the Web...It takes even less imagination to foresee how information about your comings and goings obtained from the Google Latitude Doorbell could be used in a court of law.

　　推薦句型：

　　It takes very little imagination to ….It takes even less imagination to ...

　　推薦理由：

　　這個(gè)句型看起來很簡單，但我們一般不會(huì)想到先用little表示極少，再用less表示比little還少。兩個(gè)句子排列工整，可以用在說理部分，用來描述一個(gè)不言自明、顯而易見的情況

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. It takes very little imagination to foresee how fast competition in the adulthood would turn vicious; it takes even less imagination to foresee in what way vicious competition would influence friendships.

　　2. It takes little imagination to visualize what people would be like if they do not have access to education. It takes even less imagination to visualize what a country would be like if its people are, through no fault of their own, ignorant.

　　3. It takes little imagination to foresee that people’s awareness will soon be enhanced. It takes even less imagination to foresee that governments of different countries will take joint efforts and sponsor more scientific researches against the exacerbating environment.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Competition between friends always has negative influence on their friendship.

　　這道題簡直不能同意更多，成年朋友之間一有競爭就容易友盡。用例句的話說就是，不難想象成年人之間的競爭很快就會(huì)升級(jí)成撕逼大戰(zhàn)，更不難猜競爭變味后的朋友還能不能好好玩耍。

　　2. Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

　　古話說得好，教育是國之根本，沒文化真可怕。一個(gè)人沒受過教育會(huì)是啥樣，一個(gè)國家的人都沒文化這個(gè)國家又會(huì)是啥樣，敢想嗎?所以這道題就同意唄，改善學(xué)校是國家成功發(fā)展的最重要因素。

　　3. The most important problems that affect our society can be solved within our lifetime.

　　現(xiàn)在人類最煩心的事是什么?看看帝都人民發(fā)明的APEC blue就知道了，環(huán)境啊。那環(huán)境問題能不能在我們有生之年解決呢?當(dāng)然了，都已經(jīng)水深火熱成這樣了，人民的環(huán)保意識(shí)肯定會(huì)提高啊，過年過節(jié)放鞭炮的都少了;基層人民都行動(dòng)了，各國政府還好意思圍觀么，當(dāng)然得行動(dòng)起來了。當(dāng)年的倫敦霧霾一世紀(jì)就緩過來了，我們現(xiàn)在科技這么發(fā)達(dá)，心情這么迫切，很有可能環(huán)境問題幾十年就解決了。所以這道題答yes就行了。

　　句型6

　　原文材料：

　　While, arguably, this “finding” is as trivial as an umbrella that turns blue when it’s going to rain, there is nothing trivial about collecting personal data, as innocuous as that data may seem.

　　推薦句型(變體)：

　　While...seems/sounds as adj. as can be, there is nothing more adj. than...

　　推薦理由：

　　我們在獨(dú)立寫作中經(jīng)常用到對比的寫法。這個(gè)句型可用在具有對比意味的語境中，前半句當(dāng)作讓步，“盡管對比中的一個(gè)因素看起來已經(jīng)很…”, 后半句轉(zhuǎn)折說“但是另一個(gè)因素更…”.

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. While environmental protection seems as pressing as can be, there is nothing morepressing than feeding the growing population in disadvantaged countries where the original eco-system is well preserved.

　　2. While a secure job seems as tempting as can be, there is no job more tempting than a risky and well-paid one for the new generation who are mostly avid challenge hunters.

　　3. While playing sports with a couple of friends sounds as relaxing as can be, there is nothing more relaxing than a good book or an old movie for those manual laborers who are wearied out with strenuous physical work every day.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Feeding the world’s growing population is more important than protecting environment.

　　這道題中如果我們持同意的意見，就可以用到第一個(gè)例句。盡管到處都在宣揚(yáng)保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要，但是并非世界各地的環(huán)境都破壞了啊，比如美麗的非洲大草原原始生態(tài)環(huán)境保持完好，但是一些邊緣小國民不聊生，人民瘦的皮包骨，你說feed population重要還是保護(hù)環(huán)境重要呢?

　　2. It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a risky one with a high salary.

　　根據(jù)第二個(gè)例句，我們這道題可以不同意。雖然鐵飯碗聽起來挺誘人的，但新一代的年輕人個(gè)個(gè)都很傲嬌，熱衷追尋挑戰(zhàn)，高薪高風(fēng)險(xiǎn)的工作相比之下更合他們的口味。

　　3. To read a book or to watch a movie is a better way to relax than to do some physical exercises.

　　第三個(gè)例句回答的就是這道題，確實(shí)約三五好友做做運(yùn)動(dòng)聽起來不賴，但是對于那些每天做繁重體力勞動(dòng)的工人來說，額外的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)加重他們的身體負(fù)擔(dān)，還是一本好書或者一部老電影更能幫他們放松。