托福寫作簡潔也能拿高分

　　托福作文并不是內(nèi)容越多越豐富，就一定能夠拿到高分。簡潔的作文，思路更加清晰，可以更好地提高我們的分?jǐn)?shù)。今天我們就來講講，如何利用簡潔幫助大家拿到托福寫作的高分。

　　用一個單詞代替一組意義相同的單詞刷標(biāo)題

　?、儆胒orget(忘記)代替do not remember(沒有記住)

　?、谟胕gnore(忽視)代替do not payattention to(不注意)

　?、塾胣ow(現(xiàn)在)代替at this point intime(此時此刻)

　?、苡胋ecause(由于)代替due to the fact that(鑒于下列事實)

　　省略同義詞或近義詞

　　在下面例句中，形容詞important(重要的)和significant(有重要意義的)，就是兩個同義詞(也可以說是近義詞)，我們可以省略important，只保留significant。

　?、賂he government project is important and significant.(這項政府計劃是重要的，有重要意義。)

　?、赥he government project is significant.(這項政府計劃有重要意義。

　　裁剪單詞

　　第三種方法是在不改變句子含義的前提下，省略所有可以省略的單詞，比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book (書的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red in color(是紅色的)可以省略成is red。

　?、賂he cover of the book is red in color.(書的封面是紅色的)

　　②The book cover is red.(書的封面是紅色的)

　　實戰(zhàn)演習(xí)

　　最后我們把這三種方法結(jié)合起來，將一個冗長、繞嘴的句子，改寫成一個簡短、易懂的句子。

　?、賃niversity malls must be accessible and free from congestion in orderthat students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage throughthose areas of the campus.(校內(nèi)道路必須是便于通行的，不擁堵的，以便讓學(xué)生、教師和職員能夠無阻礙地通過，到達(dá)校園的各處。)

　?、赨niversity malls must be free enough from congestion to allow peopleto walk through easily.(校內(nèi)道路不應(yīng)當(dāng)擁堵，以便人們順利通行。)

　　托福寫作12個經(jīng)典論據(jù)總結(jié)

　　1. The oldest and purest of the arguments for space exploration is theadvancement of science and technology.

　　2. We will go into space, not to bring back things which make usricher or more comfortable here on Earth. We will go there to live and make itour home.

　　3. The exploration to the universe is a high ideal –space truly is thefinal frontier .

　　4. The instinct to explore is fundamentally human; already some of ourmost amazing achievements have taken place in space.

　　5. No one can deny the sense of wonder.

　　6. The exploitation of space has directly changed our world.Satellites orbiting the Earth allow us to communicate instantaneously withpeople on different continents, and to broadcast to people all over the world.

　　7. Weather satellites save lives by giving advance warning of adverseconditions, and together with other scientific instruments in orbit they havehelped us understand our own world better.

　　8. Space exploration is an investment in the future. Our world israpidly running out of resources. Overpopulation could become a seriousworldwide threat.

　　9. Space exploration open us new world and adds to our knowledge,enabling human being to know more about the universe as well as about theearth.

　　10. Space exploration helps to acquire new resources to mitigate theenergy crisis (shortage). There may be some new kinds of natural resource inother planets.

　　11. Space exploration may find new living places for human being tosolve the problem of overpopulation. There is possibility that one day mankindmay emigrate to other planets.

　　12. Space exploration is necessary for future. If we want to progressin the world then we should continue space exploration.