托福寫作應(yīng)該怎么提高

　　俗話說讀書破萬卷下筆如有神，等我們真正寫作練習(xí)到一定的程度，那么寫作的順手也就是自然而然的事了。所以考生在閱讀范文時也需要提升量。大家可以通過大量閱讀范文來形成一些思維習(xí)慣，比如看到某個題就能想到要怎么展開，一些優(yōu)質(zhì)的句式用詞能夠信手拈來。之所以要這么做，是因為托福寫作的考試時間很緊張，如果能提前養(yǎng)成一些寫作方面的思維習(xí)慣就能有效減少構(gòu)思的時間，更順利的寫出文章。

　　看范文也要結(jié)合練習(xí)自我批改

　　同一個題目，考生自己寫出的文章在質(zhì)量上大多是很難和范文媲美的。因此，考生也需要學(xué)會結(jié)合范文來修改自己的文章。特別是在同一題目自己練過一遍同時也有范文可以參考的時候，考生如果能通過對比來發(fā)現(xiàn)自身的不足并進(jìn)行修改，就等于得到了一篇吸收了范文精華的好文章。而如果大家不勤修改自己的文章，就不知道自己原來的漏洞和不足在哪，只是悶頭寫自然也難有提升。

　　接下來是幾篇范文：

　　寫作題目：The most important factors that affect the lasting time of friendship

　　1. help each other on crisis or when things go wrong

　　2. have same interests

　　3. trust each other completely

　　范文及解析：

　　Friendship is something we should cherish, since true friends are the most intimate persons in our life besides family members. Therefore, it is crucialto find out how to maintain the long-lasting friend. Among the three options, helping each other on crisis or when things go wrong, having same interests and trusting each other completely, the first one hits my consideration perfectly.

　　友誼是我們應(yīng)該珍惜的東西，因為真正的朋友是我們生活中除了家庭成員之外最親密的人。因此，找出如何維持長久友誼是至關(guān)重要的。在這三種選擇中，在危機中互相幫助，在事情出錯時互相幫助，擁有相同的興趣，完全信任對方，第一個選擇非常符合我的想法。

　　Getting helps from friends when coming across crisis related to study could help consolidate the relationship between students and their friends - their classmates. Firstly, students often meet problems when trying to do their homework, since some of the questions they may not be able to solve and the deadline for the submission is almost there. If their classmates could sit down together and explain to them what would be the right equation to get applied to the math problem, or how to explain the chemistry phenomenon, it would be a relief for them and they would be grateful to their friends, causing to reinforce the friendship. Also, when the time for the exam is coming, a student who hasn’t finished the review would be so worried, and he urgently need the help from a friend to show him the most important key points covered by the teacher to pass the exam. They would appreciate this friend to a great extent, saying to his own heart that this guy would be my best friend forever. Talking about the application for universities, due to the intense competition, one student might be rejected by his dreamed school and get trapped in the emotion of depression. Under such circumstance, if his classmates could say some words to him that he deserves a better school since he is the best one, he could be encouraged to move on, and cherish the relationship with these friends more. Obviously, helps from classmates, who are also friends, in the period of crisis could let students know the importance of friends and so as to facilitate a long-lasting friendship.

　　當(dāng)遇到與學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)的苦難時，得到朋友的幫助可以幫助鞏固學(xué)生和他們的朋友、同學(xué)之間的關(guān)系。首先，學(xué)生在做作業(yè)的時候經(jīng)常會遇到問題，因為有些問題他們可能無法解決，提交的截止日期也快到了。如果他們的同學(xué)可以一起坐下來向他們講解如何使用正確的方程解決數(shù)學(xué)問題,或如何講解化學(xué)現(xiàn)象,這是“危難”時候的幫助，他們會感激他們的朋友,友誼也會加強。還有，當(dāng)考試時間到了，沒有復(fù)習(xí)完的學(xué)生會很著急，他迫切需要朋友的幫助，如果有朋友幫他圈出老師劃的重點，幫他通過考試。他們會很感謝這位朋友，他會對自己說，他將永遠(yuǎn)是我最好的朋友。談到申請大學(xué)，由于競爭激烈，一個學(xué)生可能會被他夢想中的學(xué)校拒絕，陷入抑郁的情緒。在這種情況下，如果他的同學(xué)能安慰他幾句，告訴他有更好的學(xué)校等著他，因為他是很棒。朋友鼓勵讓他繼續(xù)前進(jìn)，也讓他更珍惜與這些朋友的關(guān)系。顯然，在危機時期同學(xué)們的幫助，可以讓他們知道朋友的重要性，從而促進(jìn)持久的友誼。

　　Also, employees could develop the long term friendship with friends who could offer them hands for solving difficulties. When a programmer gets trapped in trying to find a hidden bug in his codes, he would be desperate, and if his friend, one colleague who is also a software engineer, could spend the whole night to be by his side for checking the codes together and finally locate the bug, he would be moved greatly. The relationship between them could be more firm. Also, it is not difficult to imagine a salesman would be in a status of worrying about failing to complete the sale performance. With this situation, if his best friend in the same company could share his own clients’ informationand guide him to them to increase the chance for the sales, this guy would appreciate such help and remember this forever. In addition, probably a designer would meet difficulty to produce an artwork to satisfy a special need from the client, while if her friend knowing about her problem through talking with her and taking her to go shopping and playing for the aim to let her abandon the bothering matters. The refreshment actually could help inspire the creativeness of the designer and finally work out the artwork. She would thank to this friend and swear to to the same thing as pay back to her, helping the better maintain the relationship.

　　此外，員工之間回向那些向他們伸出援手之人發(fā)展長期的友誼。當(dāng)一個程序員被困在試圖找到一個隱藏在他的代碼里的錯誤,他會感到絕望。如果他的朋友,一個同事也是一個軟件工程師,可以花整個晚上一起在他身邊檢查代碼,最后定位錯誤,他將很感動，他們之間的關(guān)系可能會更加穩(wěn)固。而且，不難想象一個銷售人員會擔(dān)心無法完成銷售業(yè)績。在這種情況下，如果他在同一家公司的最好的朋友可以分享他自己的客戶信息，并引導(dǎo)他給他增加銷售機會，這個人會很感激這樣的幫助，永遠(yuǎn)記住這一點。此外，設(shè)計師可能會遇到制作藝術(shù)品的困難，以滿足客戶的特殊需求，而如果她的朋友通過與她交談，帶她去購物和玩耍來了解她的問題，讓她放棄困擾的事情。這種茶點實際上可以激發(fā)設(shè)計師的創(chuàng)造力，最終做出藝術(shù)品。她會感謝這個朋友，并發(fā)誓要用同樣的東西回報她，這也有助于維持更好的維持關(guān)系。

　　Obviously, everyone would meet difficult moments, and if friends could offer hands at this time, the friendship would never get faded out.

　　顯然，每個人都會遇到困難的時刻，如果朋友們能在這個時候伸出援手，友誼就永遠(yuǎn)不會消失。