托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：獲得成功靠什么品質(zhì)？

　　The most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life

　　In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.

　　寫作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　成功類的話題是托福獨(dú)立寫作中比較常見(jiàn)的一類話題，而圍繞這類話題展開(kāi)的題目也很多，比如這道題目問(wèn)的就是獲得成功最重要的性格特點(diǎn)。題目中已經(jīng)給出了誠(chéng)實(shí)，智慧，幽默感幾個(gè)選擇，但實(shí)際上大家可以說(shuō)的性格特點(diǎn)還有很多，建議大家可以結(jié)合自己準(zhǔn)備過(guò)的名人或是成功人士的案例素材來(lái)展開(kāi)，反向從幾個(gè)名人事例中共有的性格特點(diǎn)來(lái)進(jìn)行論述。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　To be successful in life, one should have the characteristic of independence, that is, he/she has the ability to think critically. By critical thinking, one is capable of analyzing insightfully, concentrating on the right target, thereby making a wise decision. Thinking critically can enable one to analyze problems insightfully. We live in a world where controversial issues are often simply taken for granted. For example, most people are reluctant to think carefully about issues like whether boys and girls should take separate classes. Recently a high school in Beijing announced that their students from then on take separate classes. Many parents support such ridiculous decision without careful consideration. They are poor thinkers. Critical thinking is but to ask some simple yet essential questions, which always brings amazing sometimes appalling outcomes. Is such a scheme capable of eliminating underage sexual behaviors among adolescents? Is such a scheme guarantee boys and girls free of negative effects? Sadly, the decision had been made but the question left unanswered. Thinking critically can help one concentrate on right targets. We all have only and exactly 24 hours a day, but we often have mountainous work to do in hands, along with which many personal affairs seem equally urgent. Concentrating on right targets is probably the only way to overcome such dilemmas. For example, ETS has recently announced that GRE examination will be transformed back to paper based test. Grumbles are all around, and complains are posted almost on every BBS on the Internet. But if students think critically, however, they will find out the simple fact that even if ETS had made an awkward decision, test preparers should concentrate on the right target—preparing test as prudently as possible, and at the same time, grumbling never helps. Only by thinking critically can one make decisions wise and prudent. Sound decision making is essential to success. Decisions such as which movie theater we should go tonight are simple enough to make by tossing a coin, but decisions such as which university or which major we should choose are complicated enough so that we need careful comparisons. A comparison sheet will help a lot, simply by listing several relevant questions such as "Am I really interested in this major?" or "Are there more opportunities in the city where the university locates?" By analyzing insightfully and concentrating on the right targets, wise decisions are not hard to reach at all.