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托福寫(xiě)作選擇合適語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)6大參考原則分享

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2019年11月09日

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  許多同學(xué)都覺(jué)得想要在托福寫(xiě)作中秀一把語(yǔ)法水平是件很困難的事情,大家雖然掌握了不少語(yǔ)法句式結(jié)構(gòu),卻缺乏運(yùn)用它們的方法思路,也不知道如何使用才能符合寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。下面小編就來(lái)指點(diǎn)一些托福寫(xiě)作中選擇合適語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的參考原則。

  托福寫(xiě)作選擇語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)原則實(shí)例講解

  選擇合適的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡(jiǎn)練。雖然語(yǔ)法的多樣性也很重要,但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下,小編就來(lái)推薦幾種考生們?cè)诳紤]選擇何種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)可以參考的原則:

  1. 一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:

  The situation that resulted in my grandfather’s not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

  從意思上來(lái)分析,上面這句話(huà)需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to study”,而在表達(dá)這個(gè)概念時(shí),原句用的主語(yǔ)是situation,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是was,不能強(qiáng)調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)概念,可以改為下面這句話(huà):

  My grandfather couldn’t study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

  2. 避免頻繁使用“there be”結(jié)構(gòu),例如下面的句子:

  There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

  可以改為:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

  更簡(jiǎn)潔的句式為:

  My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

  3. 把從句改為短語(yǔ)或單詞。例如:

  Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

  簡(jiǎn)介的表達(dá)方式為:

  The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

  4. 僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語(yǔ)而不是主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候,才使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。例如:

  In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.

  本句不夠簡(jiǎn)潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather’s family”,而使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)后,仿佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)更簡(jiǎn)潔一些:

  In the fall, my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

  5. 用更為精確的一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),例如下面這句話(huà):

  My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

  Stand around doing nothing其實(shí)可以用一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)表達(dá),即loiter:

  My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.

  6. 有時(shí)兩句話(huà)的信息經(jīng)過(guò)組合完全可以用一句話(huà)來(lái)簡(jiǎn)練地表達(dá),例如:

  Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

  兩句話(huà)的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡(jiǎn)潔的句子:

  Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

  以上就是托福寫(xiě)作中選擇合適語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的參考原則實(shí)例講解,大家如果不知道如何寫(xiě)出結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化的好文章,上面提供的這些原則大家不妨學(xué)習(xí)一下。


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