托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：should students evaluate their teachers

　　Should schools ask students to evaluate their teachers?

　　Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　有保留地同意 (agree with reservations)。學(xué)生在評(píng)判教師時(shí)，是否全部學(xué)生都可以客觀評(píng)價(jià)(objective evaluation)?是否有足夠的能力(包括academic knowledge等等)去進(jìn)行客觀評(píng)價(jià)? 如果采取了這樣的方式，就會(huì)出現(xiàn)老師迎合(cater to/ pander to/ play up to students' taste)學(xué)生而不是引導(dǎo) (guide; lead)學(xué)生，違背了教育的原則。保留意見(jiàn)/這種方式：允許學(xué)生進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)，但是應(yīng)該作為一個(gè)參考，同時(shí)要有其他的評(píng)判方式。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Teachers have a very difficult job in society. They not only have to learn how to teach material effectively, but also must learn how to deal with a wide variety of personalities. While teaching is a difficult job, I think it is important for schools to ask students to evaluate their teachers. I think this is the right thing to do because it encourages teachers to try their best, it gives students the opportunity to choose effective teachers, and it allows the schools to have the best teachers possible teaching. If a teacher knows that at the end of the term, the students will be evaluating his/her work, then the teacher will be driven to do a very good job. If there is no pressure from evaluation, a teacher might be prone to doing a less than perfect job. I believe that everyone needs an occasional evaluation to ensure they are doing their job correctly. In the case of a teacher, the students will give the most important evaluations. If there was a public summary of which teacher scored the highest on his/her evaluations, then students would be able to take courses based on which teacher was the best at the job. This would allow students to excel in their studies, and achieve better grades. Finally, if schools ask students to evaluate their teachers, the schools themselves would be able to have the best teachers working on campus. If a teacher scored too low on an evaluation, a replacement could be found. This is a much better method than waiting for students to complain about a teacher. Teachers do have a difficult job, but regardless of this, they must excel at it. If a person is a particularly poor teacher, the students will not learn the required material, and suffer for it.