托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：learning about life

　　Learning about life: by listening to the advice of others or through personal experience?

　　Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)都有些極端。所以，大家需要先比較分析，再選擇自己的立場(chǎng)。聽(tīng)從他人勸告和建議的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)：綜合許多人的看法，可能更容易得到正確的答案;但是久而久之(in the course of time; as time passes)，可能會(huì)變得沒(méi)有主見(jiàn)(lose one's own judgment) 自己做決定、從自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)出發(fā)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)：可能不全面，但是能夠培養(yǎng)自己的觀察能力，分析能力。不同的事情，要有不同的選擇。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Some people believe that the best way to learn about life is to listen to the advice of friends and family. Others argue that the most beneficial way to learn about life is through personal experience. I want to maintain that learning about life through personal experience is the best way. I believe this because one usually does not learn well unless he/she experiences something on his/her own, because one can have different opinions and views on life man his/her family and friends, and because it is simply a more interesting way to learn. There have been many times in my life where a family member told me that life was a certain way, but I still wanted to see for myself. After having the experience, I agreed with what my family member had told me. However, I never regretted trying the experience for myself. I think one can learn something more completely if he/she experiences it for himself. When a family member or a friend tells me to do something, I value his/her opinion. However, there are some occasions when I do not fully agree with their opinions. In these cases, I want to try out the experience. There is a possibility that I will disagree with their conclusions on the topic. For example, if a friend tells me that a movie is terrible, I might still go to see the movie. It is more than possible that we will have differing opinions on whether the movie was good or not. Finally, I think it is important to learn about life through personal experience because it is a much more interesting way to learn. If one never experienced anything for oneself, life would be very boring. For example, a friend told me that Urumchi was a city that I would not enjoy visiting. He said there were not many attractions there, and there were many other beautiful places in China that I should go instead. In spite of this warning, I went to see Urumchi for myself. I did not think the city was spectacular, but I did have a good time on my trip, and was glad that I went. Having the experience of going to the place was worthwhile enough for me.