托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：childhood years are most important in one's life

　　Are a person's childhood years the most important years of a person's life?

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這道題目里既然出現(xiàn)了the most這樣絕對(duì)的詞匯，那么一般來說選擇反對(duì)disagree會(huì)是比較好的選擇，但凡絕對(duì)盡量反對(duì)這條破題原則大家要用起來。人生有不同階段，每個(gè)階段都有其各自的重要性，因此強(qiáng)行對(duì)比分高下本來就不是很有邏輯性的說法，童年當(dāng)然很重要，但成長以后青年中年甚至老年都各有其價(jià)值所在，建議大家從這個(gè)角度展開來進(jìn)行論述。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　It is generally accepted that a person's childhood years are very important years of a person's life, but it ishardly appropriate to say those years are the most important. We do not reject the importance of childhood years. Actually it is rather important for later part of a person's life.Our lives, to a large extent are subject to our recognition of our surroundings. Our world views have been structured from very early stage of our childhood, mainly through our daily experiences. Everyone therefore actually has his or her own world different from those of others, because even though we all live in a single world, each and every one of us in fact lives in distinctive worlds which are determined by distinctive perceptions that vary widely from individual to individual. Hence, we should not be surprised by the extent to which a person's life is influenced by one's childhood. Childhood, however, is only part of one's life, and it is merely one of several determinatives that shape one's adult life. Among various determinatives is one's learning ability. Human beings are superior to any other animals on the Earth simply because of their vigorous ability to learn. Psychology teaches us that training and self-training can dramatically alter one's characteristics and even the ability to learn, which may eventually alter his/her life. Furthermore, learning is a life long process, which means every part of one's life could be an essentially crucial period, and could play an indispensable role in one's life. Examples are available everywhere. Einstein was taken for an idiot by his teacher when he was a child. Even though every thankful man would have known exactly that that doesn't necessarily mean he was really an idiot, the awkward attitude of his stupid teacher absolutely mad Einstein's childhood an awful one. Nevertheless, Einstein led a wonderful life. Most parents nowadays seem to believe the statement that childhood is the most important phase of one's life, and therefore often force their children to learn those alleged essential skills for the sake of the future. The fact is, such behavior is rather presumptuous, because there still are many other important factors that affect one's life.