2020年9月19日大學(xué)考試 英語六級作文寫作解析

　　六級作文的考題更偏于抽象一點(diǎn)，3個不同考卷的主題分別是“Beauty of the soul is the essential beauty”、“What is worth doing is worth doing well”、“Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.”。通過觀察這幾個主題，我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)其共性是抽象概念，是價值觀的討論;既然提到了價值觀，就會因人而異，這是辯論文的一個特點(diǎn)。其次，考題要求說write an essay on the saying，由此可以看出這屬于非常典型的名言警句型辯論文。

　　從文章字?jǐn)?shù)要求等方面看，這次考試?yán)^續(xù)維持了150-200字?jǐn)?shù)的要求，而就名言警句型辯論文寫作來說，達(dá)到該字?jǐn)?shù)要求不會有太大壓力?？碱}要求中給出了名言警句，一般情況下是主流的價值觀，由此可以判斷出整個辯論文的基調(diào)是闡述自己對此的認(rèn)同。聽力課堂小編用其中的一個主題為例，使用傳統(tǒng)模板寫成下文，大家一起往下看看吧!

　　"Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth." The enlightenment of this saying is not lost in our era as eagerness to get rich and remain so while ignoring the true meaning of wealth seems rife. The implication of this message is that mental wealth is not only a type of wealth but also the only true one.

　　Some claim that the nature of wealth is money related, not mind related. They focus on tangible wealth which people pay so much attention to that they lose sight of intangible wealth. Some may argue that mental wealth is not as important as financial wealth. While this view might hold a bit of truth, wealth that can be lost is never the true wealth, and it is only wealth of the mind that can actually be kept forever. You spend it, but at the same time you still own it. Since wealth of the mind can not only be gained as wealth, but also be kept while being spent, what else can be more valuable than wealth of the mind?

　　From my perspective, it is crucial that we should regard wealth of the mind as a type of wealth. Also, it is high time that we realized they can be ours forever. Only by doing so can we achieve greater success.

　　上文首段用了常見模板The enlightenment of this saying is not lost in our era as … while … seems rife. 給出當(dāng)今社會的趨勢，引出話題。接著用一句話解釋名言警句，The implication of this message is that … 通過模板，將題目中的名言警句嵌入到當(dāng)前的時代背景之下。該模板適配性比較高，上面出現(xiàn)的幾個主題都可以完美契合。

　　觀點(diǎn)段用Some claim that和Some may argue that分別引出了兩種觀點(diǎn)，其中第一個觀點(diǎn)通過句型“so … that”，說明太注重有形的財富的后果是會忽略無形的財富;第二個觀點(diǎn)通過句型定語從句“wealth that can be lost is never the true wealth”和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型 “it is only wealth of the mind that …”進(jìn)行比較，說明了會失去的是有形的財富，而不會失去的無形的財富才是真正的財富;最后，使用反問句型“what else can be more valuable than wealth of the mind?”來達(dá)到強(qiáng)化的效果，增加說服力。這段采用了多樣性的句式來支持論點(diǎn)層層遞進(jìn)，向考官展示了考生觀點(diǎn)段落的辯論能力。

　　末段用了兩個建議，分別選取了should型虛擬(it is crucial that we should …)和時態(tài)倒退型虛擬(it is high time that we realized that …)，加上建議原因，最后以倒裝語序(Only by doing so can we …)大家都理解了嗎?作文題一定要記得先審題哦!