在這首小令中,作者運用巧妙的寫法,將寫景、敘事、抒情三者緊密結合,表達對宮妃的深切同情?!昂蘧d綿”“情默默”“冷清清”等疊詞的運用,貼切地表達出深宮女子的哀怨之情。
程景初·《醉太平》
恨綿綿深宮怨女,
情默默夢斷羊車,
冷清清長門寂寞長青蕪。
日遲遲春風院宇,
淚漫漫介破瑯玕玉,
悶淹淹散心出戶閑凝佇,
昏慘慘晚煙妝點雪模糊,
淅零零灑梨花暮雨。
Tune: Drunk in Times of Peace
Cheng Jingchu
The endless grief weighs on her heart in palace deep;
In silence she dreams of royal cab drawn by sheep.
Before the lonely gate grows green grass sad and drear;
The setting sun lingers, only spring wind comes here.
Her streams of tears have specked the jadelike bamboo;
Gloomy, she goes outdoors, having nothing to do.
She takes a stroll at leisure,
And gazes on the smoky scene without pleasure.
Oh! what she sees
Is drizzling rain and evening breeze
And petals falling from pear trees.