作文第三段及結(jié)尾的具體寫(xiě)作框架

解析：第三段與結(jié)尾部分是整篇文章的總結(jié)部分，對(duì)于整體來(lái)說(shuō)有點(diǎn)睛和提分的作用。本文提供的框架也分為負(fù)向文章行文思路與正向文章行文思路兩大類，第三段的總結(jié)與提升主要從兩個(gè)層面(社會(huì)層面與個(gè)人層面)來(lái)分析。

一、第三段開(kāi)頭可以用到的過(guò)渡句：

What should we do to release/fix the problem?

Are there any recommendations to solve the problem?

How to cure the pressing situation?

What should we do at present? The answer is that all hands are required to (solve the pressing problem/improve the situation.

二、負(fù)向文章行文思路：

1、社會(huì)層面

(1)中央地方共同努力

The local officials should resort to the law to regulate ( environmental conservation ) . Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank check to the local and should be partially involved in (curbing the local tainted environment).

(2)政府立法聽(tīng)民意

Our government should resort to the law to regulate ( the standard of product quality ) and shall listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (quality of product)

(3)政府直面問(wèn)題，聽(tīng)民意，平衡兩者關(guān)系

Our government should not sugarcoat(cover) the problem but listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (09-網(wǎng)絡(luò)遠(yuǎn)近the Internet) and

try to juggle ( the use of network and the supervision on it/ control over it )

try to balance between (the use of network and the control over it)

(4)學(xué)校提供相關(guān)教育

Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to learn how to juggle (03溺愛(ài)孩子their physical development and psychological maturity/ 13選擇 their study at school and internship outside the campus/off campus) on campus

(5)學(xué)校組織

Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that ( 06追星--chasing idol during the youth should be properly handled by their parents. )

(6)媒體

Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service advertisements.

to promote the awareness of

2、個(gè)人層面

(1)有問(wèn)題找家長(zhǎng)和輔導(dǎo)員

Our young generation should turn to our student supervisors and parents for recommendations about

how to (balance between internship and academy for their future career.)

how to promote their awareness of …

how to strengthen their belief that …

(2)積極投入活動(dòng)

We should take part into the campaign to promote the awareness of … and fulfill our accountability as a member of our community.

(3)啥都做

No matter how much fund that our government would put into (the recovery of tainted region), we will never see (a clean sky or breath fresh air) if effort of the young generation were absent. Although not financially independent, our college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take part into the improvement of ourcommunity.

3、負(fù)向文章行文思路結(jié)尾：

With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would get improved soon.

三、正向文章行文思路 (積極倡導(dǎo))：

( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to ( foster people’s confidence ).

1、社會(huì)層面

(1)媒體傳遞正能量media

The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to thepublic so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.

(2)教育 education

Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically，self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.

(3)學(xué)校 college

College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.

curriculum 校內(nèi)課程

extra curriculum課外活動(dòng)

electives n選修課 elective curriculums

2、個(gè)人層面

(1)改善自我

①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you can not get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.

②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.

③+給予他們時(shí)間成長(zhǎng)Of course, we can not grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.

(2)志愿工作 voluntary work

It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and socialresponsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.

3、正向文章行文思路結(jié)尾：

I am determined to say that effort and devotion from all hands would promise a prosperous and harmonious society.

I am sure that effort and devotion from all walks of life would ensure that our society make a rapid strides in near future.