高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文:2016年江蘇卷1

2016年江蘇卷

請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular inChina. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others tovote for competitions like the ＂Most Beautiful Teacher＂ and the ＂ Cutest Baby＂.

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the ＂ Best PoliceOfficer＂ competition, organized by the local government to let the publichave a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. LiJiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by theirglorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in thefuture.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the ＂ FutureSinger＂ competition. He has already received three similar invitations thisweek. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the familywill win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but hefinds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is aquestion that troubles him very much.

近年來(lái)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票在中國(guó)越來(lái)越受歡迎。人們不僅在網(wǎng)上為自己投票，還鼓勵(lì)其他人為“最漂亮的老師”和“最可愛(ài)的寶寶”等比賽投票。

李江，一名高中生，被邀請(qǐng)?jiān)诋?dāng)?shù)卣M織的“最佳警察”比賽中投票，讓公眾有一個(gè)更好的了解警察的日常工作。李江訪問(wèn)了網(wǎng)站并閱讀了所有的故事。他被他們光榮的事跡深深感動(dòng)。他已經(jīng)在考慮將來(lái)自己成為一名警察。

蘇華受他叔叔的邀請(qǐng)，在“未來(lái)歌手”比賽中為他的表弟投票。本周，他已經(jīng)收到了三份類似的邀請(qǐng)。他的叔叔告訴他，如果他的表弟贏得了比賽，他的家庭將贏得一次免費(fèi)的海外旅行。蘇華很喜歡他的表弟，但他發(fā)現(xiàn)其他歌手表演得更好。投票，還是不投票?這是一個(gè)使他很煩惱的問(wèn)題。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；

2. 用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2~3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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【寫作思路】

此類作文對(duì)考生的能力要求極高。首先考生要以30字概述短文內(nèi)容。接下來(lái)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票發(fā)表個(gè)人看法并提出理由和根據(jù)。文章要使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：

1.概述：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票越來(lái)越流行，幾乎人人都參與了網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票，在給人們帶來(lái)好處的同時(shí)，有時(shí)候也讓人進(jìn)退兩難不知道是否應(yīng)該參加這樣的投票。

2.支持：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票和生活密切相關(guān)，我們應(yīng)該積極參與。理由及依據(jù)：（1）它是一種社會(huì)生活的方式；網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票方便容易，不受時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)的束縛，同時(shí)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的反饋迅速可靠；（2）雖然有時(shí)候網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票也會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)困擾，但如果有更好的參與規(guī)則，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)更加規(guī)范合理。

3.反對(duì)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)給人帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響：（1）人們會(huì)因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)投票而產(chǎn)生被迫的感覺(jué)；（2）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票結(jié)果并不客觀；（3）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票可能會(huì)被故意利用。建議考生在寫作概述時(shí)，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練不拖沓。

【滿分范文】

Possible version one:

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitionsget people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it putsothers into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern lifeand should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in publiclife. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidatesgo around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying andvoting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, votingon the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hatevoting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things willturn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people toobey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.

(150 words)