高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文:2016年江蘇卷2

2016年江蘇卷

請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular inChina. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others tovote for competitions like the ＂Most Beautiful Teacher＂ and the ＂ Cutest Baby＂.

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the ＂ Best PoliceOfficer＂ competition, organized by the local government to let the publichave a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. LiJiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by theirglorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in thefuture.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the ＂ FutureSinger＂ competition. He has already received three similar invitations thisweek. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the familywill win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but hefinds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is aquestion that troubles him very much.

近年來(lái)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票在中國(guó)越來(lái)越受歡迎。人們不僅在網(wǎng)上為自己投票，還鼓勵(lì)其他人為“最漂亮的老師”和“最可愛(ài)的寶寶”等比賽投票。

李江，一名高中生，被邀請(qǐng)?jiān)诋?dāng)?shù)卣M織的“最佳警察”比賽中投票，讓公眾有一個(gè)更好的了解警察的日常工作。李江訪問(wèn)了網(wǎng)站并閱讀了所有的故事。他被他們光榮的事跡深深感動(dòng)。他已經(jīng)在考慮將來(lái)自己成為一名警察。

蘇華受他叔叔的邀請(qǐng)，在“未來(lái)歌手”比賽中為他的表弟投票。本周，他已經(jīng)收到了三份類似的邀請(qǐng)。他的叔叔告訴他，如果他的表弟贏得了比賽，他的家庭將贏得一次免費(fèi)的海外旅行。蘇華很喜歡他的表弟，但他發(fā)現(xiàn)其他歌手表演得更好。投票，還是不投票?這是一個(gè)使他很煩惱的問(wèn)題。

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文概要；

2. 用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2~3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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【寫(xiě)作思路】

此類作文對(duì)考生的能力要求極高。首先考生要以30字概述短文內(nèi)容。接下來(lái)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票發(fā)表個(gè)人看法并提出理由和根據(jù)。文章要使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：

1.概述：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票越來(lái)越流行，幾乎人人都參與了網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票，在給人們帶來(lái)好處的同時(shí)，有時(shí)候也讓人進(jìn)退兩難不知道是否應(yīng)該參加這樣的投票。

2.支持：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票和生活密切相關(guān)，我們應(yīng)該積極參與。理由及依據(jù)：（1）它是一種社會(huì)生活的方式；網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票方便容易，不受時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)的束縛，同時(shí)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的反饋迅速可靠；（2）雖然有時(shí)候網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票也會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)困擾，但如果有更好的參與規(guī)則，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)更加規(guī)范合理。

3.反對(duì)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)給人帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響：（1）人們會(huì)因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)投票而產(chǎn)生被迫的感覺(jué)；（2）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票結(jié)果并不客觀；（3）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票可能會(huì)被故意利用。建議考生在寫(xiě)作概述時(shí)，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練不拖沓。

【滿分范文】

Possible version two:

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhatpuzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy withit, and active in doing it.

In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negativeimpacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to dothings that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not dependon the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how manysocial-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even thecompetitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers forcommercial purposes.

In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if notimmoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out andstrictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it ismore important to be sincere and earnest.

(150 words)

可能的版本2:

現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上投票很流行。許多人對(duì)投票的消極方面有些困惑，盡管有些人很高興，并積極地這樣做。

在我看來(lái)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票已經(jīng)開(kāi)始顯示它對(duì)人們和社會(huì)的負(fù)面影響。首先，當(dāng)人們被要求做他們不想做的事情時(shí)，他們可能會(huì)感到被迫。其次，這類投票并不取決于競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手的優(yōu)勢(shì)，而是取決于他們擁有多少社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。第三，投票者甚至是參賽者在很多情況下都有可能被組織者利用以達(dá)到商業(yè)目的。

簡(jiǎn)而言之，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票，在某種程度上是不公平的，如果不是不道德的，不能信任。因此，應(yīng)該制定規(guī)則并嚴(yán)格遵守。在我們的社會(huì)中，每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該幫助那些有需要的人，但更重要的是真誠(chéng)和認(rèn)真。

(150字)