雅思寫作考試論題講解：鼓勵(lì)年輕人做義務(wù)的社區(qū)服務(wù)

　　題目：

　　Some people suggest that young adults should be encourage to do some unpaid jobs for the community, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for young people and the community? 有人建議我們應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)年輕人做義務(wù)的社區(qū)服務(wù)，是否認(rèn)為利大于弊?(經(jīng)典舊題，年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)的利弊)

　　雅思題庫中類似題目：

　　Unpaid community service, such as teaching local children sports skills, working for local charities and improving neighborhood relations, should be a compulsory part of secondary education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 社區(qū)服務(wù)，例如教授孩子們體育技能，或者為慈善團(tuán)體工作，或者是提高社區(qū)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該成為中學(xué)教學(xué)大綱的一部分，是否認(rèn)同?

　　Young adults should undertake unpaid work to help people in the community. To what extent do you think it brings more drawbacks to the community and the young adults than benefits? 年輕人應(yīng)該被鼓勵(lì)去做社區(qū)服務(wù)，是否認(rèn)為弊大于利?(2006年9月23日)

　　思路拓展：

　　鼓勵(lì)年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)的利好：

　　1. 在服務(wù)社區(qū)過程中，年輕人會(huì)加深對(duì)于社會(huì)的洞察，學(xué)習(xí)如何有效地和人交流交往，積累相關(guān)的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)， 這些都可以為年輕人未來的擇業(yè)打下了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。

　　2. 從精神成長的角度而言，年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)，尤其是幫助孤兒院的兒童或者是老人院的老人，有助于培養(yǎng)一個(gè)人的愛心，責(zé)任心，同情心，進(jìn)而使人有一種積極善良的心態(tài)。

　　3.年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)，可以給社區(qū)帶來直接的幫助，緩解他們的工作壓力，也起到了示范的作用，鼓勵(lì)更多的人幫助社區(qū)。

　　年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)的弊端：

　　1.鼓勵(lì)年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)可能會(huì)分散學(xué)生們的精力，耽誤他們的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，甚至成為一些孩子們貪玩的借口。

　　2. 各種社區(qū)服務(wù)也是有嚴(yán)格工作要求的，如果一些年輕人們?nèi)狈ι鐓^(qū)服務(wù)的知識(shí)，那么他們的工作不是幫忙，反而是添亂。

　　范文賞析：

　　首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

　　It is a common practice that young students in numerous countries are required to embark on a period of voluntary community service work. However， peoples’ views differ greatly on this practice. To voice my opinion, those who are in the formative years should be motivated to undertake glorious community work, yet, its possible downsides should be emphasized

　　二段：鼓勵(lì)年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)的利好的展開：

　　Granted， seen from the positive aspects, some merits could be gained via encouraging young students to be involved in unpaid community service. The most glaring virtue is that those who assume the responsibility of community work could learn how to care about others and provide concrete assistance. Meanwhile, it will enhance their sense of social responsibility and cultivate their loving hearts. Still, one’s co-ordination ability, teamwork spirit and management ability could be promoted during the process of serving the community. Eventually, as for many city-born young people, it is the experience of community service that makes them become independent, sociable and cooperative.

　　三段：鼓勵(lì)年輕人做社區(qū)服務(wù)的弊端的展開：

　　Nonetheless，under no circumstances can we ignore the potential drawbacks triggered by introducing unpaid community service into secondary school curriculums . First, the unpaid community service will surely occupy the finite and precious time of the students, which can otherwise be used in learning or building their bodies. Further, a great many students are too young or inexperienced to cope with the complicated community service. In this sense, instead of doing the community a favor, their voluntary activity might add burden to the community.

　　尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)

　　In closing, my stand is that although community service is a challenging task and might take up some time, the merits of encouraging students to do the community service outshine the demerits. Only by means of voluntary community work can we cultivate more and more responsible, well-behaved and caring social citizens.

　　解析：enable sb to brave new challenges in life v 使人可以面對(duì)生活中新的挑戰(zhàn)

　　解析：Only by means of doing sth， can we ……只有通過…… 我們才能做……：

　　解析：responsible, well-behaved and caring adj有責(zé)任感的：行為規(guī)范的;有愛心的

　　社區(qū)服務(wù)基礎(chǔ)寫作語料庫：

　　1. free community service free = unpaid voluntary community service = voluntary community service n 免費(fèi)的社區(qū)服務(wù)

　　2. it is a common practice that ……這是一個(gè)很普遍的做法

　　3. it is not rare to see that …… 這一點(diǎn)很常見

　　4. the merits of doing sth far outweigh its possible demerits …… 的利大于弊

　　5. those who are in the formative years = young people = young man = youngster n年輕人

　　6. care about others and provide concrete assistance v關(guān)心他人以及提供具體的幫助

　　解析：concrete assistance n 具體的幫助

　　7. independent, sociable and cooperative adj獨(dú)立的;善于社交的;有合作精神的

　　8. help the young acquire and accumulate a pool of relevant working experience v 幫助年輕人獲得和積累大量相關(guān)的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)

　　9. The young adults should be involved in some unpaid community service 我們應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)年輕人做一些免費(fèi)的社區(qū)服務(wù)

　　10. …… can，to a large extent，enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v ……可以在很大程度上提高一個(gè)人未來的就業(yè)的優(yōu)勢(shì)

　　拓展: enhance one’s efficiency of working 提高工作效率

　　11. one’s sense of …… can be strongly promoted by doing sth 一個(gè)人的……可以被……推動(dòng)

　　12. be spurred to do sth = be inspired to do sth = be motivated to do sth 某人被鼓勵(lì)做 ……

　　13. to do sth is commendable and preferable …… 是值得贊美的可取的

　　解析：commendable adj值得贊美的：preferable adj可取的

　　14. a great many = a number of = numerous 許多的

　　15. ……is of great significance …… 是很重要的

　　16. It has been suggested that = an opinion springs up that …… 有人建議 ……

　　17. compulsory part = compelling part n必修課程

　　拓展：compel sb to do sth = oblige sb to do sth = force sb to do sth 迫使某人做……

　　18. learn to how to communicate and associate with others 學(xué)習(xí)如何和 ……交往交流

　　拓展：associate with sb v 和某人交往

　　拓展：…… is a good way to socialize ……是很好的社交的好方式

　　19. via embarking on unpaid community work v 通過做義務(wù)的社會(huì)服務(wù)雅思口語考試時(shí)間

　　拓展： embark on v 從事……

　　20. sb can not only do sth but also do sth 某人不但可以做……而且可以做……