英語四級翻譯每日一練 281

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作為世界最大的碳排放國，中國將首次推出旨在減排的碳交易計(jì)劃(carbon trading scheme)。碳交易平臺已在深圳建立，這個(gè)平臺將允許企業(yè)購買排放碳的許可。中國還計(jì)劃在另外七個(gè)地區(qū)開展類似的計(jì)劃，分析家稱這是邁向全國性的碳交易市場的第一步。但分析家還表示，該計(jì)劃只能涵蓋城市碳排放的38%，不太可能使整體排放量顯著下降。然而，中國的目標(biāo)是到2020年，將碳濃度(carbon intensity)水平降低40%。

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China, the world's largest carbon emitter, is to launch its first carbon trading scheme aimed at reducing emissions. A carbon trading platform allowing businesses to purchase grant of emitting carbon was established in Shenzhen. China is also planning to cany out similar schemes in seven other areas. Analysts say this is the first step towards a nationwide carbon trading market. But analysts have also said that the scheme which covers just 38 percent of citys，carbon emissions is unlikely to reduce overall emissions significantly. However, China is aiming at reducing the level of carbon intensity by 40 percent by 2020.

1.作為世界最大的碳排放國，中國將首次推出旨在減排的碳交易計(jì)劃:“破排放國”可譯為carbon emitter, emit意為“發(fā)出；排放；散發(fā)；發(fā)射”；“旨在”可用固定短語aim at表示；“破交易計(jì)劃”可譯為carbon trading scheme, “碳交易” 是為促進(jìn)全球溫室氣體減排和減少全球二氧化破排放所采用的市場機(jī)制。
2.這個(gè)平臺將允許企業(yè)購買排放碳的許可:“允許”可用allow表示，“允許某人 做某亊”為allow sb. to do sth.；“許可”在此譯為名詞grant。
3.中國還計(jì)劃在另外七個(gè)地區(qū)開展類似的計(jì)劃:“開展計(jì)劃”可直接譯為plan to,“計(jì)劃做某事”則為plan to do sth.。
4.分析家稱這是邁向全國性的碳交易市場的第一步:“邁向…的第一步”可用the first step towards…表示。