在英語
四級學習的道路上,改錯練習是提升語言準確性不可或缺的一環(huán)。通過仔細審查并修正句子中的錯誤,我們不僅能加深對英語語法的理解,還能提高寫作和表達的準確性。下面,讓我們一起進入今天的英語
四級改錯練習。
原文
With the develop of technology, the way we communicate have changed dramatically. People are now more likely to send messages online than write letters. However, some people argue that this is a negative trend, and that writing letters is more effective way to communicate. In my opinion, I disagree with this.
隨著科技的發(fā)展,我們的交流方式發(fā)生了巨大變化?,F(xiàn)在,人們更傾向于在網(wǎng)上發(fā)送信息,而不是寫信。然而,有些人認為這是一種消極的趨勢,寫信才是更有效的交流方式。我不同意這種觀點。
Firstly, writing letters can be slow and inefficient. It takes a long time to write a letter, and then even longer for it to be delivered. Compare to emails, letters are slower and less convenient.
首先,寫信速度慢、效率低。寫一封信要花很長時間,送信的時間更長。與電子郵件相比,寫信更慢、更不方便。
Secondly, letters are not as easy to store and organize as emails. You can easily search for emails by key words, but you have to manually search through letters if you want to find something. Last but not least, writing letters requires a lot of effort. You need to find paper, pens, envelopes, and stamps, which are all expensive. In conclusion, I believe that emails are a better way to communicate.
其次,信件不像電子郵件那樣易于存儲和整理。你可以很容易地通過關鍵詞搜索電子郵件,但如果你想找東西,就必須手動搜索信件。最后但并非最不重要的一點是,寫信需要花費大量精力。你需要找紙、筆、信封和郵票,這些都很昂貴??傊艺J為電子郵件是更好的溝通方式。
答案解析
1.錯誤:With the develop of technology
更正:With the development of technology
解析:此處“develop”是動詞,表示“發(fā)展”,而這里需要的是一個名詞形式,表示“發(fā)展”的狀態(tài)或過程,所以應該使用“development”。
2.錯誤:the way we communicate have changed dramatically
更正:the way we communicate has changed dramatically
解析:主語“the way we communicate”是第三人稱單數(shù),所以動詞“have”應該改為“has”。
3.錯誤:and that writing letters is more effective way to communicate
更正:and that writing letters is a more effective way to communicate
解析:在“more effective way”前缺少不定冠詞“a”,表示“一種更有效的方式”。
4.錯誤:In my opinion, I disagree with this
更正:In my opinion, I disagree with this view
解析:為了使表達更明確,可以添加“view”或“argument”等詞,指明不同意的是哪種觀點或論點。
5.錯誤:Compare to emails, letters are slower and less convenient
更正:Compared to emails, letters are slower and less convenient
解析:“compare to”是動詞短語,而在這里需要的是一個形容詞短語作狀語,所以應使用“compared to”的形式。
6.錯誤:You can easily search for emails by key words
更正:You can easily search for emails by keywords
解析:“key words”在這里指的是多個關鍵詞,而“keywords”是一個單詞,用來泛指關鍵詞,更符合語境。
7.錯誤:which are all expensive
更正:which are all expensive items
解析:為了使句子意思更完整,可以添加“items”來明確指的是紙、筆、信封和郵票這些物品都很貴。
以上就是英語
四級改錯示例,在英語
四級備考中,需要保持持續(xù)的學習和練習,不斷提高自己的英語能力。