中英之鑒 中式英語(yǔ)之鑒106

　　[誤] Owen couldn't hold back his exciting feeling, and he shouted, "I've got the winning number in the bond!"

　　[正] Owen couldn't hold back his excitement, and he shouted, "I've got the winning number in the bond!"

　　注：exciting feeling 這種搭配很不地道，雖然“振奮人心的消息”是 exciting news，“有趣的故事”是 interesting story，但“激動(dòng)的心情”卻要用名詞形式 excitement 來(lái)表達(dá)。